I looked over at Odysseus standing next to me. He was already in his beggar’s clothing. It was a pleasant sight for me, the overly proud king, so full of his abilities, dressed like the lowliest part of society. It had been so easy for me to get him into those clothes as well. All I had had to do was tell him that it was a job that required far more cunning then I possessed. He was so pleased by his position as one of Athena’s heroes that he had fallen for it. Never mind that Athena had once gone so far as to drive my chariot for me. He continued to think of himself as the only hero the goddesses had eyes for.
This wasn’t the first time that I had been forced to work with Odysseus, there had been once before. When we had been sent to fetch Heracles we had gone together as well. By now I knew better then to trust the man beside me. He was a cheater and a liar, and willing to go to the most underhanded first. I knew that if it was to his advantage we would have to face one another, and soon. For the time being however we had to work together, it was for the good of the troops. It would hurt moral as badly as it had been hurt when Achilles and Agamemnon had fought if Odysseus and I fought. So I pretended to be pleased to be called the only man worthy of working with Odysseus on this mission, just like the last one, and went along with it. I had to remind myself that at one time I would have been honored to be compared to Odysseus.
Helenus had been a difficult person to get information out of. It had taken us a very long time; after all he was the son of King Priam’s son. Even when going into voluntary exile, out of spite since he hadn’t gotten to marry Helen, Helenus wasn’t willing to betray his city easily. He was a fortune teller however, he once whispered to me once that he knew that there was no way to save the city of
“You wait here for me while I go scout out where the Palladium is,” Odysseus told me, before going into the tunnel. As if we hadn’t already been over this repeatedly. Odysseus was the hungriest man I had ever encountered for fame. Worse then
I waited two hours before I also entered the tunnel and walked deep into the enemy city. Odysseus was standing at the entrance, clearly waiting for me. I fought down my annoyance. Never mind that he could have come and got me if he was done with his reconnaissance, never mind the snub.
To be continued...
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I don't think I like how Odysseus is being portrayed in this. He wasn't out for fame. He didn't even want to go to Troy.
Sorry I'm being so critical this morning, but your portrayal of Odysseus as a show-off who doesn't seem so bright, rubs me the wrong way. He was not supposed to be a great fighter. He was supposed to be a clever strategist.